Bursting excitement
Discover
Uncover
Skin silently screaming
Go ahead
Steal a peek
Have a gander
Explore
What He adorns
In all its pleasure
Not one
Or two
But more than a few
His names
Hebrew and Greek
Wondering
What does this mean?
Moving round
On the way down
Seeing stars
Double triangular points
1 2 3
Creating the perfect trinity
Elated
Astounded
Grabbing for the tush
Pause
Surprise
A dancer
Made of fire
Breathe in Red
Giggles fill the head
Seeking not over
One still exists
Written in black
A poem upon the back
Each for Him
This one most of all
Thirteen words
Of a language
Holy enthralled
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Breathe In Red 
very creative; i like the “1 2 3”
but not so sure that’s a “perfect” trinity; the word “perfect” seems too absolute, almost vain in fact
and maybe “Holy” breaks the rhythm at the end; can it be deleted? i.e.: “Of a language enthralled” on one line
appreciate the post and the time you put into your thoughts
there is much potential here